Design Critique (Get Feedback on My Design)

Critique my design and tell me how to improve it. WHAT IT IS: [[DESIGN]] GOAL OF THE DESIGN: [[GOAL]] AUDIENCE: [[AUDIENCE]] DESCRIPTION (or paste details): """ [[DESCRIPTION]] """ Give me: 1. First impression — what works 2. Issues by area: hierarchy, layout, typography, color/contrast, spacing, copy, usability 3. Severity for each (nitpick → blocker) 4. The top 3 changes that would most improve it 5. One thing I should NOT change (it's working) Be specific and honest, like a senior designer in a crit.Copy